Thick Delivery (Hot Romance Book 1) By Lauren Score

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Even though it has been 2 months since Ashlee moved in her new apartment she never had the courage to speak to anyone in the neighborhooduntil one day she was lucky enough to meet Jason Staring at his body she thought he was a bodyguard or one of the many dangerous gang guys of the block To her surprise he was the pizza boy making deliveries with his bicycle but she couldn t know that pizza was not the only thing he was delivering The two get closer in just a few days and when the moment was right she wasn t prepared for what her eyes could see So thick big and build like iron Too hard for her She was not a virgin but she never saw or could imagine something like that making dirty dreams about it all day long Little she knew that was not the only surprise Jason would make her having secrets about his present and his past then she would ever imagine Thick Delivery Hot Romance Book 1 Thin DeliveryI m very surprised about the 5 star reviews This book needs an editor badly Normally things like that don t bother me But it made me look at the authors bio to see if she where she was born Because there was WOrd usage that made me think she was from another country which is no problem Then sentences started not making sense Book is not complete so that means problems I see author plans on releasing a book a week I would suggest maybe slow down and use a beta reader at least I m sorry I very rarely leave bad reviews because I look at it as my opinion is only important to me but wanted to let people know that the story doesn t end in this book and you can make your decision as to whether you want to read after looking and consider whether you want to read after looking at all reviews Kindle Edition I try not to give a one stareverI thought this book had promise. Thick delivery cooler bag but it truly failed to delivery I DNF s at about 40% I triedI really didand I can t remember the last time I gave up on a book because usually if I motor through it gets better This one just didn t This story was just all over the place the dialogue didn t flow at all I don t try to bash an authorand maybe I was missing something with this one but yeahI won t be finding out what happened to these two Kindle Edition.